RE: Final Press Release of Orlando Meeting

["Rachel Foerster" <rachelf@ix.netcom.com>]

Bob,

At this point I would suggest that the Awareness team defer to yours and the
ExC's editorial decisions. Thus, I recommend that Carol make appropriate
revisions (unless there is not consensus among the ExC) and release the
report.

Rachel

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Subject: Re: Final Press Release of Orlando Meeting


Comments:

- I think the "Create a Single Global XML Framework
  Solution" is just awkward. I know that this has been
  debated, but something like "Create a Single Global
  XML Business Framework" is better.
- I would change "listserv discussions" to be "email
  mailing list discussions".
- I would move the Webber quote to be the paragraph
  before the last ("The next meeting ...").

The date on the top should probably be changed or omitted.

Bob

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