Re: BP V2.0 Comments

["Marcia L. McLure Ph.D." <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>]

Bob,

Thank you for  taking time to review our Business Process document.  I will
take your recommendations and share them with the team.   I will also see to
it that your comments are added to our comment log and your comments are
addressed.

Again, thank you Bob for your input.

Best regards,
Marcia
BP PT Co-Lead

Marcia L. McLure Ph.D.
MMI
28720 Canwood Street Suite 208
Agoura HIlls CA 91301
818-706-3882
-----Original Message-----
From: Miller, Robert (GXS) <Robert.Miller@gxs.ge.com>
To: marcia.mclure@mmiec.com <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>
Date: Wednesday, July 05, 2000 8:38 AM
Subject: BP V2.0 Comments


>Marcia,
>
>I've not the time to review this document in detail, but I did give it a
>glance, and I too was overwhelmed by that first diagram.  I offer some
>suggestions:
>
>Line 114:
>Reduce the diagram to five boxes, one for each 'color' (labelled by
>content).  Show only the interfaces among
>the boxes.  I put green upper left, brown upper right, purple lower left
>below brownbut above purple, blue aligned horizontally with yellow but
>indented from green, to avoid intersecting lines.  Label the interfaces.
>Use the whole page if necessary to contain the reduced diagram.  Bigger is
>more readable.
>
>Line 158 (for example)
>In the breakdown diagrams, I suggest the subject functions be arranged so
>that they are on the left of the page, and the interfaced functions are on
>the right of the page, with a dashed line divider between the two  Also,
>shuffle the boxes to avoid crossed lines to the extent possible.  In the
>Line 158 diagram, Moving ResourceCatalog, EconomicResourceType and Economic
>Resource to the right of the other 'blues' and moving
>StepDefinition to the right of the 'yellows' untangles the lines.
>
>Cheers,
>            Bob Miller
>


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