RE: proposed Executive Summary paragraph

[Joaquin Miller <miller@joaquin.net>]

Bob Miller's suggestions are excellent.  But we need to
go further.  One example:

> facilitates the infrastructure release
> ...

(i don't propose a rewording, because i don't know what this wants to
mean.)

Cordially,

Joaquin

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Joaquin Miller

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