resend: Re: ebxml Messaging Services spec v 0.2

[Chris Ferris - Sun East Coast IR Development <chris.ferris@east.sun.com>]

David/All,

Some comments embedded below. Again, thanks David for
all your effort in getting the draft ready for review!

Cheers,

Chris

"Burdett, David" wrote:
> 
> Folks
> 
> Here's the updated messaging service spec. I've done all the changes apart
> from those described below.
> 

<snip/>

> ------------
> Outstanding changes
> 
> In making the changes I found the following problems which I meant I
> couldn't quite make the changes as agreed ...
> 
> 1. I've changed section 2.2.1 Content Type to reference two mandatory
> attributes (type and boundary) and two optional (version and charset) as
> there are four attributes not two !!

I think that this is correct and aligned with what we
discussed. I'll defer to Dick for the final say in the
matter.

> 2. Still not clear when version or versionless ebXML Header Envelopes should
> be used.

I still don't recall the concept of versionless envelopes
being discussed. IMHO, we should only be dealing with a
version identified envelope. I thought that I had submitted
a comment to this effect, but possibly not. In any event,
I think that we need to have a rationale and a clearly expressed
requirement for versionless packaging/header (which I cannot
find) or else lines 205/206 should be removed.

> 3. There is a difference in the style of writing and usage of MS Word
> headings between the "packaging specification" part of the spec and the
> "ebXML header document" part of the spec. Suggest reworking the ebXML Header
> Document part of the spec to be in the same style as the packaging spec and
> adding Word headings.

I'm not sure that I follow. I could see renaming the 
section 3 heading to read "Header Document" (ebXML is 
somewhat redundant, don't you think;-)

> 4. Changed status of Marty's changes 105 to 108 to Defer as they are
> technical change and not an editorial change and I could not see any way to
> express the solution clearly.
> 5. Changed status Gordon's changes to Message Type (change 114) since I we
> have not discussed or agreed what the changes should be.

That's fine, we should make a note to discuss this at the
f2f in Dallas.

> 6. Not sure that the Schema has been updated correctly to reflect changes to
> DocumentReference.
> 7. Moved agreed changes refs 124 to 127 (about PartyId) back to suggested
> changes as we are still discussing these.
> 8. Not done change 153 (remove detail of the XML Documents) as think it
> probably needs some discussion.

Possibly. I would think that we should be able to find
a much more succinct example with less payload content.
Another approach would be to add a <snip/> element
to truncate a major part of the message;-)

> 9. Can't do change 156, as I don't know who should (or should not) be there
> 10. Can't do changes 160, 161 - no new examples for Appendix B

We can update the examples, schema and DTD for the final
draft.

> 11. Also deleted reference to the glossary in General Conventions since it
> is covered in Notational Conventions
> 
> I'll send out an updated change list that reflects the above soon.
> 
>  <<ebXML Messaging Service Specification v0-2.doc>>  <<ebXML Messaging
> Service Specification v0-2.pdf>>
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