Re: [ebxml-mktg-sc] ebXML JMT PPT Draft Final

[Sang Shin <sang.shin@sun.com>]

David,

Do you have a plan to add speaker notes to the slides some point?
I can certainly help on this.

-Sang

David RR Webber - XML ebusiness wrote:
> Monica,
> 
> Thanks for sending the changes and PPT fragment.  I've
> merged and included the changes as noted below.
> 
> Message text written by Monica Martin
> 
> Slide 8 - Use smaller bullets - too many words - wasn't this what it was
> before?
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done
>>>
> 
> Slide 30-34 - Need Speaker Hint - I like that sun figure!
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done
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> 
> Slide 42 - Add XML in Ontario (XiO) project; What about EDAT?
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done - I also removed the IJI project for now - that's
>>>
> still too early on that specific one.
> 
> Slde 43 - Update as eBES has already begun.
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done
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> 
> Slide 49 - Change first bullet perhaps to read: ebXML V3.0 enhancements
> - partner discovery / content management services
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done
>>>
> 
> Slide 43 - Suggest you update to show the Repository and greater
> function of Reg/Rep; What about recent release of CPPA spec?
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done - added in several OASIS project themes, and
>>>
> cleaned up slide, and also fixed slide 42 to match.
> 
> Slide 56 - Suggest you say Web services and discovery - leave out UDDI
> 
> 
>>>>Check - done
>>>
> 
> I also changed Slide 57 to say "Increasing Maturity" - sometimes the
> obvious
> is too obvious!
> 
> OK - the revised and updated is attached ZIP.
> 
> Thanks, DW.


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