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Subject: Re: [ebxml-mktg-sc] ebXML JMT PPT Draft Final
David, Do you have a plan to add speaker notes to the slides some point? I can certainly help on this. -Sang David RR Webber - XML ebusiness wrote: > Monica, > > Thanks for sending the changes and PPT fragment. I've > merged and included the changes as noted below. > > Message text written by Monica Martin > > Slide 8 - Use smaller bullets - too many words - wasn't this what it was > before? > > >>>>Check - done >>> > > Slide 30-34 - Need Speaker Hint - I like that sun figure! > > >>>>Check - done >>> > > Slide 42 - Add XML in Ontario (XiO) project; What about EDAT? > > >>>>Check - done - I also removed the IJI project for now - that's >>> > still too early on that specific one. > > Slde 43 - Update as eBES has already begun. > > >>>>Check - done >>> > > Slide 49 - Change first bullet perhaps to read: ebXML V3.0 enhancements > - partner discovery / content management services > > >>>>Check - done >>> > > Slide 43 - Suggest you update to show the Repository and greater > function of Reg/Rep; What about recent release of CPPA spec? > > >>>>Check - done - added in several OASIS project themes, and >>> > cleaned up slide, and also fixed slide 42 to match. > > Slide 56 - Suggest you say Web services and discovery - leave out UDDI > > >>>>Check - done >>> > > I also changed Slide 57 to say "Increasing Maturity" - sometimes the > obvious > is too obvious! > > OK - the revised and updated is attached ZIP. > > Thanks, DW. -- --------------------------------------------- Sang Shin sang.shin@sun.com Strategic Market Development (781) 442-0531(Work) Sun Microsystems, Inc. (781) 993-1136(Fax) http://www.plurb.com/webservices/index.html#Bio http://www.plurb.com/misc/te/SangSchedule.html (Life is worth living... with Passion!) ---------------------------------------------
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