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Subject: comments on the editorial comments for this thursday's call

Lines 40-41, need the word "normative" or "non-normative" somewhere.

<CBF> I believe that this is minor technical. I have a similar comment outstanding that also
addresses this issue. The transport bindings should,
IMHO, be normative and should be in the body of the document, not treated as an appendix.</CBF>

Lines 82-92. How do these compare with the documents mentioned in lines

I agree with the comment, but would propose that it be addressed
by including the RegRep and TP document (referenced in 110/116) in the
list of related documents.

Line 84. Change "of the" to "on these"?

<CBF>I would prefer the following:
defines the requirements for the ebXML Message Service

Lines 121-123. Reword to indicate this is one possible architecture, not
a required architecture.  Consider separating the "applications" and
"interface" boxes, as is done with the transport box -- that would help
emphasize what this particular document is defining.

It would help to have a specific proposed wording for this
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