Re: editorial comments for this thursday's call

[SHIMAMURA Masayoshi <shima.masa@jp.fujitsu.com>]

Mr. Christopher Ferris, 


On Wed, 24 Jan 2001 11:35:19 -0500
christopher ferris <chris.ferris@east.sun.com> wrote:
> All,
> 
> I've collated all of the editorial comments against v0.92
> submitted to date. Please review this carefully and
> identify any that:
> 	- you don't agree to
> 	- you feel are more correctly classified as
> 	minor or major technical

Your collection of comments on v0.92 lacks my comments I posted on 17th
Jan (see below or
<http://lists.ebxml.org/archives/ebxml-transport/200101/msg00176.html>).
Please add my comments to the collection soon before the Thursday's
teleconference.


> Date: Wed, 17 Jan 2001 17:35:00 +0900
> From: SHIMAMURA Masayoshi <shima.masa@jp.fujitsu.com>
> Subject: comments on v0.92 16 Jan 2001
> To: ebxml-transport@lists.ebxml.org
> Message-ID: <20010117173218.791B.SHIMA.MASA@jp.fujitsu.com>
> 
> Thank you for updating the MS spec to v0.92. Here are my comments.
> 
> 
> - line 639 [editorial] : change 'four attributes' to 'five attributes'
> 
> - line 650 [editorial] : change 'MUST used' to 'MUST be used'
> 
> - line 655 [editorial] : I think "not specified" is unclear description.
>   I'd like to suggest changing to "not used".
> 
> - line 664, 665 [editorial] : It seems to me that the two sentences
>   662-664 and 665-666 should be one sentence. I'd like to suggest
>   deleting newline between line 664 and 665.
> 
> - line 771 [editorial] : change 'from Party MSH' to  'From Party MSH'
> 
> - line 772 [minor technical] : In previous POC demo, a vendor's
>   SequenceNumber  implementation was invalid. In the implementation,
>   SequenceNumber is  incremented in retry sequence. So I'd like to
>   suggest inserting following sentence between line 772 and 773 to avoid
>   such misunderstanding.
> 
>     "When the From Party MSH re-sends same message again in retry
>     sequence, the From Party MSH MUSH identify same SequenceNumber which
>     was used for the message in first sending of the message."
> 
> - line 779 [editorial] : insert one space character after period
> 
> - Some lines [editorial] :  Since SequenceNumber element was moved to
>   the Header element from the Routing Header element, 
>     - line 834 : delete this line
>     - line 857-870 : delete this description
>     - line 2339 : delete this line
>     - line 2364 : move this line after line 2321
> 
> 
> Regards, 
> 
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Regards, 

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SHIMAMURA Masayoshi <shima.masa@jp.fujitsu.com>
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