Re: editorial comments for this thursday's call

[christopher ferris <chris.ferris@east.sun.com>]

Shimamura-san,

Appologies! I will most certainly do so now.

Cheers,

Chris

SHIMAMURA Masayoshi wrote:
> 
> Mr. Christopher Ferris,
> 
> On Wed, 24 Jan 2001 11:35:19 -0500
> christopher ferris <chris.ferris@east.sun.com> wrote:
> > All,
> >
> > I've collated all of the editorial comments against v0.92
> > submitted to date. Please review this carefully and
> > identify any that:
> >       - you don't agree to
> >       - you feel are more correctly classified as
> >       minor or major technical
> 
> Your collection of comments on v0.92 lacks my comments I posted on 17th
> Jan (see below or
> <http://lists.ebxml.org/archives/ebxml-transport/200101/msg00176.html>).
> Please add my comments to the collection soon before the Thursday's
> teleconference.
> 
> > Date: Wed, 17 Jan 2001 17:35:00 +0900
> > From: SHIMAMURA Masayoshi <shima.masa@jp.fujitsu.com>
> > Subject: comments on v0.92 16 Jan 2001
> > To: ebxml-transport@lists.ebxml.org
> > Message-ID: <20010117173218.791B.SHIMA.MASA@jp.fujitsu.com>
> >
> > Thank you for updating the MS spec to v0.92. Here are my comments.
> >
> >
> > - line 639 [editorial] : change 'four attributes' to 'five attributes'
> >
> > - line 650 [editorial] : change 'MUST used' to 'MUST be used'
> >
> > - line 655 [editorial] : I think "not specified" is unclear description.
> >   I'd like to suggest changing to "not used".
> >
> > - line 664, 665 [editorial] : It seems to me that the two sentences
> >   662-664 and 665-666 should be one sentence. I'd like to suggest
> >   deleting newline between line 664 and 665.
> >
> > - line 771 [editorial] : change 'from Party MSH' to  'From Party MSH'
> >
> > - line 772 [minor technical] : In previous POC demo, a vendor's
> >   SequenceNumber  implementation was invalid. In the implementation,
> >   SequenceNumber is  incremented in retry sequence. So I'd like to
> >   suggest inserting following sentence between line 772 and 773 to avoid
> >   such misunderstanding.
> >
> >     "When the From Party MSH re-sends same message again in retry
> >     sequence, the From Party MSH MUSH identify same SequenceNumber which
> >     was used for the message in first sending of the message."
> >
> > - line 779 [editorial] : insert one space character after period
> >
> > - Some lines [editorial] :  Since SequenceNumber element was moved to
> >   the Header element from the Routing Header element,
> >     - line 834 : delete this line
> >     - line 857-870 : delete this description
> >     - line 2339 : delete this line
> >     - line 2364 : move this line after line 2321
> >
> >
> > Regards,
> >
> > --
> > SHIMAMURA Masayoshi <shima.masa@jp.fujitsu.com>
> > TEL:+81-45-476-4590(ext.7128-4241)  FAX:+81-45-476-4726(ext.7128-6783)
> > Planning Dep., Strategic Planning Div., Software Group, FUJITSU LIMITED
> 
> Regards,
> 
> --
> SHIMAMURA Masayoshi <shima.masa@jp.fujitsu.com>
> TEL:+81-45-476-4590(ext.7128-4241)  FAX:+81-45-476-4726(ext.7128-6783)
> Planning Dep., Strategic Planning Div., Software Group, FUJITSU LIMITED
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