Re: Comments on MS V.941

[Shumpei NAKAGAKI <nakagaki@mxb.mesh.ne.jp>]

Folks,

Where can I get MS V.941 ?

Shumpei

At 20:12 01/03/03 -0600, you wrote:

>line 168 remove "of" after the word "containing"
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>ALL values associated with the Content-ID MIME header of the ebXML header
>and payload containers SHOULD adhere to the syntax rules for Content-ID
>described in sections 7 of RFC 2045 and inherited from section 4 of RFC 822,
>which defines the syntax for msg-id.
>Said another way: all Content-ID values SHOULD be placed inside <>, e.g.
>Content-ID: <id1@example.com>.
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>line 261 add the words "headers or" between "MIME parameters".
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>lines 303/304 refers to an encoding declaration contained in the ebXML
>Header Document. I believe this reference should be removed.
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>line 308/309 - insert a blank line between 308/309
>
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>lines 423-425 - need more detail describing Action. I propose adding the
>following text:
>"The content of Action is a text string formed in accordance with the rules
>for a NMTOKEN as defined in the [XML] specification."
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>line 437 - The Timestamp element appears to be optional. I believe this
>should be a REQUIRED element.
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>line 453 - There is no description of the date/time format to use in
>TimeToLive. I propose adding the following text to line 453:
>
>"The format of CCYYMMDDTHHMMSS.SSSZ" is REQUIRED to be used. This time
>format is Coordinated Universal Time (UTC)."
>
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>section 8.4.10 regardign #wildcard elements, states:  "additional elements
>may by added to the MessageHeader element immediately following the
>MessageData element."
>
>It seems to me this should read " immediately following the Description
>element, if present, or the MessageData element."
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>line 618, the MessageId should contain "mid:UUID-2" instead of "UUID-2"
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>line 620, the RefToMessageId should contain "mid:UUID-1" instead of "UUID-1"
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>
>Still reviewing - I may have more comments later...
>
>
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