RE: Draft of Proposal going to eBTWG (Collaboration Patterns and Commitments)

["Hayes, Brian" <Brian.Hayes@Commerceone.com>]

This is a good proposal!

Comments
Section 1.2.2, para 1/ [Editorial]/ Change "IE." to "For example" or "That
is you can" or something else.

-----Original Message-----
From: Welsh, David [mailto:David.Welsh@nordstrom.com]
Sent: Thursday, August 09, 2001 4:53 PM
To: 'ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org '
Cc: 'bhaugen '
Subject: Draft of Proposal going to eBTWG (Collaboration Patterns and
Comm itments)



Per this morning's BP team's conference call, attached is a Draft Copy of
the Proposal now in the eBTWG Proposal Format that we intend to submit this
weekend to the eBTWG Chair and Vice-Chair's.
As we agreed on the conference call, Bob Haugen and I have formatted /
reviewed the document and are now putting it out for a day of public
comments / input.
We'd appreciate any further feedback you'd have before this coming Saturday
(August 11). Bob and I will then work the comments and submit the Proposal.

Thanks
-Dave Welsh