Re: All 4 BP/CC Analysis Team docs

["Marcia L. McLure Ph.D." <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>]

Thanks Larissa for your comments.  I will make the changes to the doc first
thing in the morning. Talk to you then. ZZZ good night.
Marcia
----- Original Message -----
From: "Larissa Leybovich" <lleybovich@vitria.com>
To: "'Marcia L. McLure Ph.D.'" <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>
Cc: "'ebXML-CCBP-Analysis (E-mail)'" <ebxml-ccbp-analysis@lists.ebxml.org>
Sent: Sunday, March 18, 2001 11:36 PM
Subject: RE: All 4 BP/CC Analysis Team docs


> Here are my comments on the BP and BD AnalysisOverview doc.
>
> 1. Line 173 - change
> a. From: "recommend"  To: "recommended".
> 2. Line 227 - "Modelling" should be "Modeling"
> 3. Line 228? - change
> a. From: " 3 The UMM is not an ebXML document; however, it is a
significant
> document"  To: "The Unified Modeling Methodology is not an ebXML document;
> however, it is a significant document which is administered by the
> UN/CEFACT."
> 4. Line 258/259 - My understanding is that Design Time Components are
> defined in the BOV section of the Open-EDI Reference Model [ISO14662E].
> Line 268 - "The specifications/models for the defined business processes
and
> business are stored and registered in Business Libraries...". Seems that
the
> word "documents" or other clarifying noun is missing between the
"business"
> and "are stored".
>
> 5. Line 343 - change From: "an cross-functional" To: "a cross-functional"
> 6. Line 345 - change From "it is recommend" To: "it is recommended"
> 7. Line 443 - "One of the key tools to assist with the analysis are the
> ebXML Business Process Analysis Worksheets..."   Replace "are" with "is".
> 8. Line 460 - "analyze business processes activity...".  Capitalize like
> "Analyze Business Processes activity" as it is in the Fig 8.4.1.
> 9. Line 677 - Industry - "The BOM provides a logical categorization of a
set
> of processes, these processes may organized in more than one way (scheme)
or
> from more than one view including industry." Insert "be" after "may".
> 10. Line 677 - Product - "The kind of product influences the kind of
product
> information." This sentence is not clear.   Needs refinement.
> 11.
>
>
>
>
>
> Larissa Leybovich
> Vitria Technology
> Supply Chain Solutions
> Irvine         949-857-4233
> Cell            949-836-2545
> Sunnyvale  408-212-2716
>
>  -----Original Message-----
> From: Marcia L. McLure Ph.D. [mailto:marcia.mclure@mmiec.com]
> Sent: Sunday, March 18, 2001 1:17 PM
> To: Ebxml-Core@Lists. Ebxml. Org
> Subject: Fw: All 4 BP/CC Analysis Team docs
>
>  << File: BpWorksheets-WIP-0.9c.doc >> << File: C of Common Business
> Processes.doc >> << File: E-Commerce and Simple Negotiation3.doc >> <<
File:
> RAnalysisOverview-WIP-0.doc >> CC Team Members,
> Please read my earlier email traffic below.
> Attached you will find four docs that will be submitted for QR Review on
> Monday from the BP/CC Analysis Team. Yes, I know, It is the weekend but if
> you can find the time to review these docs and provide feedback, we would
> greatly appreciate your input.
> Thank you.
> Best regards,
> Marcia McLure
> BP PT Co-Lead
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Marcia L. McLure Ph.D." <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>
> To: "Ebxml-Core@Lists. Ebxml. Org" <ebxml-core@lists.ebxml.org>
> Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2001 10:16 PM
> Subject: Re: All 4 BP/CC Analysis Team docs
>
>
> > All four docs for your draft ebXML doc library.
> > Marcia
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: "Marcia L. McLure Ph.D." <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>
> > To: "'ebXML-CCBP-Analysis (E-mail)'"
> <ebxml-ccbp-analysis@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > <ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org>
> > Cc: "'ebXML-BP@llists.ebxml.org'" <ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > "Ebxml-Core@Lists. Ebxml. Org" <ebxml-core@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > <lms@wwnet.com>; <mblantz@netfish.com>; "Johnston, Simon"
> > <sjohnsto@Rational.Com>; "Nieman, Scott"
> > <Scott.Nieman@NorstanConsulting.com>; "James D. Clark"
<jdc-icot@lcc.net>;
> > <Anne.Hendry@eng.sun.com>
> > Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2001 10:03 PM
> > Subject: Re: Doc 4 of 4: Catalog of Common Business Processes
> >
> >
> > > Yes! Here it is....the long awaited 4th document of the 4 BP/CC
Analysis
> > > Team documents titled: ebXML Catalog of Common Business Processes.
> > > Please review as critically as the other three documents.
> > >
> > > Now I have a favor to ask and I am going to have to ask for your
> > > understanding regarding this the final document headed out the door at
> > this
> > > hour. I am having very little luck creating the Table of Contents for
> this
> > > doc and have not yet created the Figures Table of Contents.  I also
hit
> an
> > > unyielding wall trying to number all of the pages-landscape and
portrait
> > > style. I am sure there is a very easy solution to these trivial
problems
> > but
> > > at this late hour, it is time to go home and have at least one Guiness
> > with
> > > my friends before St. Patrick's Day has completely faded away. You
> should
> > > expect that with a last name like "McLure", I must have at least one
> beer
> > to
> > > celebrate the Day!
> > >
> > > Dave Welsh, one of the ebXML Magnificent, esteemed member of the
Catalog
> > > Group, as well as an editorial wizard, may I please ask your
assistance
> on
> > > the matter of the Table of  Contents (both text and figures) and page
> > > numbering?  Would you be willing to complete the Table of Contents and
> > > numbering of the document tomorrow morning and email your edited copy
to
> > me?
> > > I will then begin making the add, changes and deletes as they arrive
in
> my
> > > mailbox on the returned,edited copy. If you are unable to do so,
please
> > let
> > > me know as early as possible.  Thanks Dave.
> > >
> > > Now I am off to share a "Pint" with my good buddies.
> > > Cheers!
> > > Marcia
> > >
> > > ----- Original Message -----
> > > From: "Marcia L. McLure Ph.D." <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>
> > > To: "'ebXML-CCBP-Analysis (E-mail)'"
> > <ebxml-ccbp-analysis@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > > <ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org>
> > > Cc: "'ebXML-BP@llists.ebxml.org'" <ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > > "Ebxml-Core@Lists. Ebxml. Org" <ebxml-core@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > > <lms@wwnet.com>; <mblantz@netfish.com>; "Johnston, Simon"
> > > <sjohnsto@Rational.Com>; "Nieman, Scott"
> > > <Scott.Nieman@NorstanConsulting.com>; "James D. Clark"
> <jdc-icot@lcc.net>;
> > > <Anne.Hendry@eng.sun.com>
> > > Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2001 7:41 PM
> > > Subject: Re: Doc 3 of 4: E-Commerce and Simple Negotiation Patterns
> > >
> > >
> > > > Team Mates:
> > > > Here is the promised 3rd of 4 documents titled: E-Commerce and
Simple
> > > > Negotiation Patterns for your review.  Enjoy!
> > > > Marcia
> > > >
> > > > ----- Original Message -----
> > > > From: "Marcia L. McLure Ph.D." <marcia.mclure@mmiec.com>
> > > > To: "'ebXML-CCBP-Analysis (E-mail)'"
> > > <ebxml-ccbp-analysis@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > > > <ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org>
> > > > Cc: "'ebXML-BP@llists.ebxml.org'" <ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > > > "Ebxml-Core@Lists. Ebxml. Org" <ebxml-core@lists.ebxml.org>;
> > > > <lms@wwnet.com>; <mblantz@netfish.com>; "Johnston, Simon"
> > > > <sjohnsto@Rational.Com>; "Nieman, Scott"
> > > > <Scott.Nieman@NorstanConsulting.com>; "James D. Clark"
> > <jdc-icot@lcc.net>;
> > > > <Anne.Hendry@eng.sun.com>
> > > > Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2001 4:55 PM
> > > > Subject: Re: Doc 2 of 4: BP Worksheets and Gudielines
> > > >
> > > >
> > > > > Team Mates:
> > > > >
> > > > > Here is the 2nd of the 4 docs titled: Business Process Analysis
> > > Worksheets
> > > > &
> > > > > Guidelines requiring your review.  Please pay special attention to
> the
> > > > View
> > > > > Comments notations found throughout the document as related to
> > phrases,
> > > > > words, footnotes etc.. Also you will see Section 14 Appendix C
Open
> > > > Issues.
> > > > > In this section you will find unresolved issues or specific
requests
> > for
> > > > > additional detail such as definitions.  If you can provide insight
> and
> > > > > assistance in any of these topic areas, please do so. It is
expected
> > > that
> > > > > this section will not be included in the doc going to QR on Monday
> but
> > > it
> > > > is
> > > > > a useful tool for our purposes this weekend.
> > > > >
> > > > > I am also attaching the first document titled: Business Process
and
> > > > Business
> > > > > Document Analysis Review.  This document was sent earlier this
> > morning.
> > > > > However, I just added the ccbp-analysis list to this email and we
> may
> > > have
> > > > > picked up a few additional BP Project Team Souls and CC Project
Team
> > > Folks
> > > > > who would also like the opportunity to review these docs.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you all.
> > > > > Best regards,
> > > > >
> > > > > Marcia
> > > > > BP PT Co-lead
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > ----- Original Message -----
> > > > > From: Marcia L. McLure Ph.D.
> > > > > To: ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org
> > > > > Cc: lms@wwnet.com ; mblantz@netfish.com ; Johnston, Simon ;
Nieman,
> > > Scott
> > > > ;
> > > > > James D. Clark ; Anne.Hendry@eng.sun.com
> > > > > Sent: Saturday, March 17, 2001 12:26 PM
> > > > > Subject: Re: BP/CC Analysis Docs ready for your review
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Team Mates:
> > > > > Top o' the Morning to You-Happy St. Patrick's Day.
> > > > >
> > > > > Before you go out and celebrate this weekend with a pint of
Guiness,
> > > > please
> > > > > find attached for your review the document titled : Business
Process
> > and
> > > > > Business Document Analysis Overview. This is the first one of four
> (1
> > of
> > > > 4)
> > > > > promised documents you will receive throughout the day. Your input
> is
> > > > > valuable to us so please take some time today or tomorrow to
comment
> > on
> > > > the
> > > > > documents.
> > > > >
> > > > > Please review the documents on four levels:
> > > > > 1)  Is the content of the document accurate and consistent
> throughout?
> > > Is
> > > > it
> > > > > consistent with its companion documents and other ebXML documents
or
> > > > > specifications?
> > > > > If you recognize issues, please raise them now and provide a
> proposed
> > > > > resolution.
> > > > > 2)  Are references and adjunct documents properly represented?
> > > > > If not, please provide accurate titles, notations, etc. for
accurate
> > > > > representation in the document.
> > > > > 3)  Are there editorial adds, changes and deletions needed?
> > > > > If so, please identify the line, the error and the proposed
change.
> > > > > Lastly,
> > > > > 4)  If you can supply any additional detail, definitions or
> > > clarification
> > > > to
> > > > > this document, please do not hold back!
> > > > >
> > > > > I will be checking my email messages (marcia.mclure@mmiec.com)  on
a
> > > > regular
> > > > > basis for your recommendations throughout the day and night.
> > > Recommended
> > > > > changes will be made to the documents as they arrive or forwarded
to
> > one
> > > > of
> > > > > our very own  'ebXML Magnificent' with the expertise to deal with
> your
> > > > > specific comment.
> > > > >
> > > > > Thank you all.
> > > > >
> > > > > Best regards,
> > > > > Marcia
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > ----- Original Message -----
> > > > > From: Marcia L. McLure Ph.D.
> > > > > To: ebxml-bp@lists.ebxml.org
> > > > > Cc: Anne.Hendry@eng.sun.com ; James D. Clark ; Nieman, Scott ;
> > Johnston,
> > > > > Simon ; mblantz@netfish.com ; lms@wwnet.com
> > > > > Sent: Friday, March 16, 2001 8:34 AM
> > > > > Subject: Memo: Bp Analysis Docs ready for your review
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Dear BP and CC Team Members:
> > > > >
> > > > > The BP Project Team Analysis Group led by Brian Hayes has created
> four
> > > > > documents that will be delivered to QR on Monday March 19th. These
> > > > documents
> > > > > will be made available for your review Saturday morning. Please
> email
> > > your
> > > > > comments and proposed resolutions to (marcia.mclure@mmiec.com)  no
> > later
> > > > > than Sunday evening 5 pm Pacific Coast Time in order for us to
> achieve
> > > our
> > > > > March 19th QR submission date.
> > > > >
> > > > > Also, two conference calls have been scheduled:
> > > > > Monday, March 19, 8:00 AM PST for the Analysis Team to review the
> > > > documents
> > > > > and submitted comments
> > > > > and
> > > > > Wednesday, March 21, 8:00 AM PST.  The Regularly Scheduled
Analysis
> > Team
> > > > > meeting.
> > > > >
> > > > > Teleconference Access Information:
> > > > >  Toll Free Number: 877-939-5307 (18 lines)
> > > > >  USA Toll Number: +1-712-237-3264   (2 lines)
> > > > >  PASSCODES 266233#
> > > > >
> > > > > We look forward to your comments. Thank you all.
> > > > > Best regards,
> > > > >
> > > > > Marcia McLure
> > > > > BP PT Co-Lead
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > >
> > > > > Marcia L. McLure Ph.D.
> > > > > MMI
> > > > > 28720 Canwood Street Suite 208
> > > > > Agoura Hills, California 91301
> > > > > phone  818-706-3882
> > > > > fax        818-706-1213
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