RE: proposed Executive Summary paragraph

["Miller, Robert (GXS)" <Robert.Miller@gxs.ge.com>]

Hi All,

In my opinion, the first sentence alone would cause most executives to stop
reading!
It is littered with acronyms and somewhat sophisticated technical jargon.

Here is my attempt for your consideration:
  (NOTE: "..." is to be filled in with readable text defining the following
acronym)

Executive Summary:

The ebXML Specification Schema provides a standard framework by which
business systems may be configured to support execution of business
transactions.  It is based upon prior UN/CEFACT work, specifically the
...(UMM) defined in ... 

The current version of the specification schema facilitates the
infrastructure release of ebXML's ...(TRP), ...(TP), and ...(RegRep)
specifications. 

A subsequent version will address additional desired(required?) features
such as  Resources/Events/Agents, multi-party choreography, and context
based content. 

Cheers,
         Bob Miller