Revised changes to Message Services Spec v 0-1

[David Burdett <david.burdett@commerceone.com>]

The following are the revised updates to the messaging services spec.

David


1	14	1
2	16	1
3	29	2
4	99	2
5	99-100	2
12	111	3
15	133-134	1
16	140	Editorial
18	144-145, 148-149	Minor
19	149	Editorial
21	154	Editorial
22	157	Editorial
28	190	Major
29	192-193	Editorial
30	194	Editorial
32	198-199	Editorial
36	200-202	Minor
38	202+	Editorial
41	207	Editorial
43	213-214	Editorial
45	215	Editorial
50	224-228	Minor
52	227	Editorial
53	238-240	Editorial
56	249	Minor
57	250	Minor
58	252-254	Minor
64	260-270	Major
66	272	Editorial
69	285-291	Major
70	286	Editorial
72	292	Editorial
73	297	Editorial
74	301	Editorial
77	301-304	Editorial
83	315-320	Major
86	326	Editorial
89	334	Major
95	359	Editorial
96	360	Editorial
97	361	Editorial
98	368	Editorial
99	370	Editorial
100	372-374	Minor
109	386	Editorial
111	387	Editorial
112	389-390	Minor
113	391	Editorial
115	394	Major
117	395	Editorial
118	410	Editorial
119	411	Editorial
120	412+	Major
121	416+	Major
122	437	Major
123	454+	Major
129	499	Editorial
133	507	Editorial
137	520	Major
141	521	Major
142	527	Editorial
144	532	Editorial
145	533	Editorial
149	See text of suggestion	Editorial	 (See Note 1)
150	275-282 & 328-335l	Editorial	 (See Note 2)
153	781+	Editorial
154	General	Editorial
155	General	Editorial

Note 1 (Ref 149)
Update the suggested change to the following ...

"We should use ""communication protocol"" rather than ""transport"" or
""transport protocol"" when we are referring to the likes of HTTP or SMTP.
Lines where this applies are: 101, 102, 121, 153, 154, 181, 182, 183, 185,
187, 188 (twice), 190 (twice), 526, 1322, 1332, 1343 (transport level
requirement)"

Note 2 (Ref 150)
Update the suggested change to the following ...

"Envelope vs Container. These are used ambiguously. For example, the diagram
on page 7 suggests that the ebXML (header or payload) container and the
envelope are the same. However the examples on lines 275-282 (header) and
lines 328-335, indicate that the ""header"" is the MIME header for the mime
part. Suggest we add the following definitions after the diagrams on page
7...

* An ebXML Header (or Payload) Envelope are the MIME headers that are
associated with a MIME part
* An ebXML Header (or Payload) document is the content of the MIME part and
is:
    - an XML document for the ebXML Header, and
    - an XML or some other document for the ebXML Payload
* An ebXML Header (or Payload) container, is the combination of the ebXML
Header (or Payload) envelop and the document it contains

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